Thursday, February 24, 2011

Thursday, February 24, around 630 pm


Greetings!

A few reminders about the upcoming In Class Essay #1 on Monday.

1. You will have the entire class session to write and complete the essay. Use your time wisely. Spend the first five or ten minutes choosing a prompt (there will be 3 to choose from), and planning your main points and supports.

2. I consider this effort as I would a rough draft. I do not evaluate in class essays the same way I do out of class essays. I realize it will not be your VERY BEST writing given the time restraints. Think of it this way: if you receive an 85/100 on an in class essay, just figure that if you wrote that same exact essay having three weeks to write it out of class, your score would be about 10 to 15 points lower than what you earned on the in class essay.

3. Remember to bring a blue (or green) book to class--I do not care what size it is.

4. You may use pen or pencil.

5. Try to remember to skip every other line, but if you forget, don't spend time re-writing the essay.

6. You may write on the back side of the paper if you wish.

7. You may bring any notes you have about the film to class to use while writing your essay.

TO PREPARE FOR MONDAY:

I suggest that you have a substantial answer to all seven of the study questions.

I also suggest that you read the interview with the filmmakers, available on line. SEE LINK BELOW.

http://www.daughterfromdanang.com/about/qa.html

YOU WILL HAVE THREE PROMPTS TO CHOOSE FROM...YOU WILL WRITE ON ONLY ONE.

1. EXPLAIN SPECIFICALLY THE REASONS WHY HEIDI ULTIMATELY HAD THE EXPERIENCE SHE DID WHEN SHE RETURNED TO VIETNAM, HER FIRST HOME. BE SPECIFIC

2. AS A VIEWER OF THIS DOCUMENTARY, DO YOU FEEL IT WAS AN EFFECTIVE OR INEFFECTIVE DOCUMENTARY? WHY OR WHY NOT? BE SPECIFIC.

3. THINK ABOUT THE DEFINITION OF HOME...AND HOW IT CAN CHANGE FOR MANY PEOPLE BASED ON ONE'S EXPERIENCES. THINK ABOUT HEIDI AND HOW SHE MIGHT HAVE DEFINED HOME BEFORE HER TRIP....AND THEN AFTER HER TRIP. BE SPECIFIC.

Monday, February 21, 2011

Monday, February 12, early evening

Hello!

Due to the technical difficulties we experienced in class today...it appears we will be spending more time on Wednesday in class viewing the rest of the film than I had first anticipated. Because of that, I am including the study questions in the blog this evening.

There is no need to submit answers to these questions. They are simply questions to help you focus on some of the more significant aspects of the documentary. Furthermore, if you are able to produce answers to these questions--for your own reference--you should not have any difficulty with the in class writing next Monday.

Please print out these questions and bring a copy to class on Wednesday.


DISCUSSION QUESTIONS---THINGS TO THINK ABOUT

1. One reviewer describes the film as a “gut-wrenching examination of the way cultural differences and emotional expectations collide.” Would you agree this is an accurate description? Why or why not? Explain specifically.

2. Were there parts of the film that made you feel uncomfortable? If so, what were those parts and can you articulate why they made you feel uncomfortable?

3. Heidi acutely feels that she has been rejected by two mothers: her birth mother who gave her up and her Tennessee mother, whose cold, untouching demeanor drove a wedge between them. How does this fact impact Heidi and what she ultimately experiences when she returns to Vietnam?

4. The film is considered a very powerful one by many other small filmmakers as well as many reviewers. In your opinion, what makes this an effective or ineffective film?

5. What preconceived ideas about home are proven inaccurate after viewing the film?

6. In an interview with the filmmakers, they admit that when they decided to film Heidi’s return to Vietnam, they assumed that the reunion would be a healing story, a kind of full circle coming home. The war in Vietnam was long over and they felt they could create a film that would ease the collective pain that is still connected to the war. Instead, what they did discover?

7. Some viewers have condemned Heidi for representing an aspect of American culture that they believe is selfish and individualized. What do you think and feel about Heidi’s reaction for the family’s request for money?

Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Tuesday evening, 10 pm, February 15

Hello,
I apologize for informing you so late. I really was hoping I would feel a whole lot better after resting most of the day, but alas, I do not. There is no class on Wednesday, the 16th, tomorrow. I have attached information on viewing a documentary film and viewing a narrative film. Please read through this before Monday. We are watching a documentary film and you will be writing your In Class Essay 1 on this film. Have a good and safe weekend.

English 1A
Prof. Fraga

In preparation for viewing the second film for the semester
and for viewing a documentary next week.

Purpose:
Just as reading fiction, non-fiction and poetry can aid in the development of a discriminatory, critical mind—and lead to critical writing and analysis in ANY area or topic—the viewing of films can elicit the same result.

A narrative film is a work of fiction.

A documentary film is a form that purports to report on the world as it exists. The documentary filmmaker uses various well-known techniques taken from the world of news reporting:

• reporting events as they happen,
• recording interviews with participants, and
• utilizing photographs and testimony of historical figures to portray past events.

Sometimes, the distinction between narrative and documentary has to be carefully drawn.

For example, occasionally actors are used to portray characters in historical documentaries such as Ken Burns’ Jazz, usually in voice-over. On the other hand, narrative films will often borrow various documentary techniques: Steve Soderberg in Traffic used hand-held cameras and a complicated interweaving of different stories to mimic a documentary “feel.” Nevertheless, it is clear that Traffic is a narrative film, and Jazz is a documentary.

It is generally assumed that documentaries will not deliberately falsify a view of reality…however, it is true that inevitably the documentary will reflect the filmmaker’s point of view, resulting in some manipulation of the absolute truth. The main way documentaries shape the story is through

• choosing the interview subjects,
• selecting certain shots and framing devices,
• and most importantly by editing the material to support their vision as filmmakers.

To be sure, the director of a documentary may often attempt to show a balanced point of view by posing questions regarding a problem or by advancing various solutions.

But often a documentary will abandon such an attempt and use powerful evidence to advance a certain ideological argument, as in the classic Harlan County, USA, about a miners’ strike in Harlan County, Kentucky, in 1973. Here, the miners’ side in the strike is presented through emotional interviews, songs, meetings, and events on the picket line, while what little we see of the owners’ point of view is presented in a negative light. This kind of documentary that presents an argument is called a rhetorical form of documentary.

In evaluating a documentary it is important to understand what kind we are judging and thus what the filmmaker’s objectives are:

• Is the filmmaker trying to put forth his or her own point of view or attempting to show a balanced point of view?
• What techniques are being used to reveal the point of view?
• What methods are used to gather data?
• What are the criteria for choosing the people to be interviewed?
• What kind of shots are used to portray the subjects, and how does editing contribute to the ideological and emotional effect of the film?

THE NARRATIVE FILM—how to evaluate

In evaluating whether a film is “good” or not, it is important to consider a few main points that will aid in discussion and in writing a critical response.

1. Do the most important filmic elements such as photography, acting, editing and design support and complement each other? Is this unified style supportive of a strong theme? Does the film fit into a certain genre? Does it imaginatively add something to the traditions of that genre or does it merely copy them in a clichéd manner?
2. Do events flow naturally, and in this flow of action are there surprises and twists that engage an audience’s interest? Is there a strong climax and resolution? If the structure is nonlinear, do these varied elements build to some powerful emotional and/or intellectual effect? Does the dialogue seem appropriate to the style and environment of the film? If it is meant to be a realistic film, is the dialogue natural and spontaneous?
3. Do the characters and relationships seem specific and real? Do we identify with their goals and problems? Do the actors seem convincing? Do the actors present well-observed character details? Is there emotional truth in the playing? Is the acting style appropriate for the specific film genre?
4. Finally, looking at the film as a WHOLE…Common sense issues are very relevant. For example, does the film hold our interest throughout? Do we care about what happens on the screen? After the film, does it have a powerful effect on us? The answer to this last question separates the great films from the merely good ones.

Tuesday afternoon, February 15. 2011

Hello,

below is a copy of the handout I distributed in class on Monday. It is a sample intro paragraph and first supportive paragraph for out of class essay 1.

and thank you to the person who left the valentine rose on the podium yesterday!
hope all of you had a memorable day...:-)

Dave Matthews

Prof. Fraga

English 1A, 1

1 October 2010


Lessons of Home

Much has been written about the importance of reading to young children beginning from the moment they are born. In fact, many parents insist that starting the pattern of reading aloud to one’s child should begin while the child is still in the womb. Besides for the need to expose young people to books and the joys of reading in their early years, the subject matter of these books should also be considered as significant. Exposing children to a wide variety of topics certainly aids in feeding their imaginations. For example, the theme of home is found in hundreds of children’s picture books and it is a compelling theme that invites a wide variety of approaches and sensibilities.
Beloved children’s author, Beatrix Potter, wrote about a little rabbit who ventures away from home, gets into mischief, and when he arrives back home, is exhausted and ill and falls directly to sleep. Certainly young listeners learn about right and wrong and what happens when a parent’s words are not heeded. Yet, even though Peter knows his mother will be disappointed in his behavior, he still wants to go home. Potter suggests that home is a safe place, away from Mr. McGregor. Potter writes, “Peter never stopped running or looked behind him till he got home to the big fir tree. He was so tired that he flopped down upon the nice soft sand on the floor of the rabbit-hole and shut his eyes” (27). David Jorgensen’s pastel and watercolor illustrations depict Peter as content and rather relieved as he sleeps on the floor, and later in his bed. Peter is out of harm’s way at home and he is obviously loved by his mother, who feeds him chamomile tea to soothe his upset stomach and tucks him into bed. Potter’s message about home is very clear and very comforting for children to learn: home should be a safe and forgiving place of solace and love.


THIS IS A SAMPLE ESSAY: INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH AND FIRST SUPPORTIVE PARAGRAPH ONLY.

Wednesday, February 9, 2011

Wednesday evening, February 9th, 9 pm

Greetings,
below is a copy of Out of Class Assignment #1 which was discussed and distributed in class today.
Have a safe and enjoyable weekend.

Be sure to check the blog and stay current through the weekend.

And if you follow and read the course outline, you should easily stay on task.
Please note that you have your second Q and C due on Monday. :-)

Best, Prof. Fraga


Eng. 1A, Section 11, Spring 2011, Instructor: C. Fraga

ASSIGNMENT: OUT OF CLASS ESSAY #1
• Assigned: Wednesday, Feb. 9
• Rough Draft due, typed & dbl. spaced (optional): no later than Wednesday, Feb. 23
• Due: Wed. March 2

You have a total of three weeks to work on this essay. Your final draft should reflect this fact.
Please select one of the prompts below and write an interesting, informative, well
supported analysis response.
Requirements:
• Must be typed and double-spaced and have a title.
• Must follow MLA format (I will explain what my expectations are for this paper)

Since the purpose of this course is to strengthen your exploratory, expository and analytical writing with an emphasis on utilizing research and reading skills…AND because the theme for this course is the significance of home…I offer you a selection of three different essay prompts that each require you to carefully and deeply examine the theme of home in a particular genre. It is my intention that you will be drawn to one of the three enough so that you are motivated and even excited to conduct your research and write the essay.

Prompt #1:
For this essay you will research the theme of home as it is found in children’s picture books. After perusing several picture books, you will select a minimum of six to discuss, analyze and review for their success (or failure) in presenting the theme of home, through both words and illustrations. In your analysis, be sure to consider the intended audience.

Prompt #2:
For this essay you will research the theme of home as it is found in song lyrics. After perusing and studying many song lyrics, you will select a minimum of six songs to discuss, analyze and review for their success (or failure) in presenting the theme of home.
In your analysis, be sure to consider the intended audience.

Songs/Lyrics you may NOT analyze (please)! ☺:
“Home” (Chris Daughtry)
“Sweet Home Alabama” (Lynyrd Skynyrd)
“Home” (Michael Buble)
“Can’t Take me Home” (Pink)

Prompt #3:
For this essay you will research the theme of home as it is found in three different films (OR at least three episodes from a television series). You will discuss, analyze and review each film (or episode) for its success (or failure) in presenting the theme of home. In your analysis, be sure to consider the intended audience.
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IN ORDER TO ADDRESS ANY OF THESE THREE PROMPTS FULLY AND ADEQUATELY, YOUR ESSAY SHOULD BE AT LEAST 5 PAGES IN LENGTH (approximately)

Phrases you may NOT use in your title or anywhere in your essay. Doing so will lower the overall grade you earn for the essay:

There’s no place like home.
Home sweet home.
Home is where the heart is.
Home means different things to different people.

Friday, February 4, 2011

Friday afternoon, February 4th


Hello!

As you know, there is a quiz on Monday on pages 2-60 in your Rules of Thumb textbook. As discussed in class, it is an open book quiz. Please remember to bring your book as a reference. Since you will not have the entire class session to complete the quiz, do take time over the weekend to peruse these pages and become familiar with them.

Reminder--!!!
Beginning on Monday, our classroom has changed to RIVERSIDE, ROOM 2010.

Have a great weekend, be safe, and I will see you on Monday!